For those following along, I offer up this update.
I have begun the first major round of revisions between draft 1.1 and draft 2.0. I do want to know when using the computer programmer jargon of “version” with numbers became commonplace. Seriously who ever thought we could say that we’re working on draft version 2.3 and someone would know what we meant?
Do accomplish this I have axed the last 6,000 words and will be picking up where that leaves me off. Most of my revisions to the first portion of the book are still pretty solid, but I plan to keep revising them, providing more depth etc etc.
Check this space for more updates but my ultimate goal is to declare the work “complete” by April of 09. There is a point of diminishing returns on editing and I do want to free myself to consider a new project for Nanowrimo 09, or to just spend time with my little guy.
And for those that want it, here’s a short snippet from my 2.0 draft, chapter 2: